We are getting ready to send this out on Monday with any luck. Who would like to give us some feed back on the finished proposal? Misspelled words, opinions like does it drag on anywhere? Do you lose interest or does it suck you in. Anything you can offer that you feel that could make it better. We have added more to the proposal in Word that does not appear in the blog. Martin and Jeremy’s stories for instance.

I need to know if the right stories are in there to get a publisher’s interest, does it suck you in leaving you wanting more? Or does it fall flat? I am going to go through it again and try to add some more humor. This book has so many levels to it, like it’s a personal story about an Indigo and Avatar, not just a bunch of collected stories about a lot of nameless kids, this is a personal story of one Indigo who understands quantum physics and his struggles with the current school system and how we dealt with it.
It’s a story about an Avatar and his courage and grace when dealing with horrific life conditions. It’s a story about a family raising an Indigo who is also an Avatar. It’s a about the strong bond between a mother and son and father and son. The bond & love between 2 parents dealing with a major illness with their son. I just think there are so many levels to this book alone, let alone the other 2 books that can come right after this one!

Martin said he would make the proposal available as a pdf file for download when it is done.

So stay tuned for the download!! ;-)

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  1. Karen T. says:

    I would love to read it!

  2. Swati says:

    I would! :-D And you know Leah would for sure…she was saying the other day that she would love to see the book proposal :-)

  3. Leila says:

    Oh Connie, I’m not the best editor ;-( I am one your fans though! and would be happy to read it.

    Isn’t there someone from the ATP board who is a professional???? Maybe there’s more than one on there that would love to be of service.

    Love & hugs

  4. Dana says:

    I’d love to see it too!

    BTW – I listening to the replay of last Wed’s show and as usual, tis timely and great! I feel for the poor man who called in about his mother. WOW! If ever you think you have it bad…you hear about others who have it much worse! *shudderZ* Great insights Martin and Andrew! (Connie too ;) )

  5. Leah Clark says:

    ME! (waves arms) OVER HERE!

  6. Denise says:

    Me ! TOO Me TOO
    Of course you knew that!! he he

  7. Pretty Mama says:

    No worries Leila, we’re looking for comments on how interesting it is as well not just for editing sake. An AI helped with editing with my last book.

    Martin and I will be working on the proposal all day today so we can send it tonight. It’s almost done, just making corrections and adding a few more things.

    With any luck the download will be up tonight or tomorrow in the download section that can be found on the homepage. If you are registered on the site you will see it, if not you won’t.

    Ummm you will be reading it as Leah and not as Eunice right Leah?? Not sure Eunice will understand it! LOL LOL I’ll be stopping by and leaving a comment on your youtube video. You should post it in the forum!

    Gotta get back to the proposal now

  8. admin says:

    Thanks for listening to the show Dana. I felt bad we couldn’t help that guy, but his issue was waaaaay to long to be dealt with on our show. Not to mention we couldn’t make the whole show about him & his problem. It needs to be dealt with off air where he can get the time he deserves.

  9. Leila says:

    “With any luck the download will be up tonight or tomorrow in the download section that can be found on the homepage. If you are registered on the site you will see it, if not you won’t.”

    Well! You sure know how to get me to register again!!!! LOL LOL LOL
    I gave up and signed up again with new name & password.
    I’ll just keep changing names & passwords if that’s what it takes! LOL LOL
    I did catch up on all the reading on the forum. Good stuff and lots of love on there! Thanks!

    It’s all good!

  10. Leo says:

    Good luck, Connie!

    I’ll check out the download.

  11. admin says:

    Martin has been working on the log in issues, even he had them and couldn’t log in under admin on his computer! It took some time but it appears he fixed the issues for log in!! *doin happy dance*

    I will be glad when I an release this book proposal! I have lots more to write but I don’t have to unless we find a publisher.

  12. Tammy says:

    LOVE the new sight YES!!! Can I still see the proposal????

  13. admin says:

    Ummmm NO! NO PROPOSAL FOR YOU! In best Soup Nazi voice *feeling so powerful now, I evil laugh with echo now too!*

    Marts sez you are already “on the list” Anyone who wants to be able to see the 3 chapters use the contact button to let Martin know because if you rely on me telling Martin, he doesn’t listen to me. Baaaaawaaaaaa!

    Soooooo Tammikins, are you still going to be in your place in Laguna? I know your lease is up in Aug and you said you didn’t want to stay there last year. What about this year? We’re planning on coming out in Oct before heading to Kona and stopping back by when we leave Kona. I’m trying to get a show booked as well as some stage time with Bill Word and Norma Jean. Just to give ya heads up on what I’m working on.

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