We are getting ready to send this out on Monday with any luck. Who would like to give us some feed back on the finished proposal? Misspelled words, opinions like does it drag on anywhere? Do you lose interest or does it suck you in. Anything you can offer that you feel that could make it better. We have added more to the proposal in Word that does not appear in the blog. Martin and Jeremy’s stories for instance.
I need to know if the right stories are in there to get a publisher’s interest, does it suck you in leaving you wanting more? Or does it fall flat? I am going to go through it again and try to add some more humor. This book has so many levels to it, like it’s a personal story about an Indigo and Avatar, not just a bunch of collected stories about a lot of nameless kids, this is a personal story of one Indigo who understands quantum physics and his struggles with the current school system and how we dealt with it.
It’s a story about an Avatar and his courage and grace when dealing with horrific life conditions. It’s a story about a family raising an Indigo who is also an Avatar. It’s a about the strong bond between a mother and son and father and son. The bond & love between 2 parents dealing with a major illness with their son. I just think there are so many levels to this book alone, let alone the other 2 books that can come right after this one!
Martin said he would make the proposal available as a pdf file for download when it is done.
So stay tuned for the download!! ;-)